Friday, November 7, 2008

Starting at Sunset Chapter 6

"Jeffery!" I screamed. "What the hell are you doing here?"

"I came to see you to make sure you were happy here and came as a surprise to make you feel better. And when I get here you're kissing another guy when I'm your boyfriend!"

Ryan looked at me as if I had betrayed him. "Is this true?"

I stared at him in disbelief. "No. Absolutely not. I broke up with him."

"No, you said that it was temporary. You said that when you moved back we could be together."

"NO JEFFERY! Get the HELL OUT OF MY LIFE! FOREVER!" I screamed at him.

"Fine. I'll just go back to my girlfriend." Jeffery said turning away. "Since we're officially over, I guess that I should tell you that I was cheating on you."

"You were WHAT?!" I screamed. I started to walk to him, getting ready to kick him where it really hurts but Ryan pulled me back.

"Please, allow me." He walked up and the next thing I knew, Jeffery was on the ground writhing in pain. I laughed. Ryan came over, put his arm around me and we walked off laughing. I felt so happy. My old boyfriend was in pain and I was walking away with a new boyfriend who was true to me and who loved me back.

My dad some how found out about what happened. I thought he was going to punish me and tell me to break up with Ryan. But instead he invited me and Ryan for ice cream, which is something he never did. It was the best day I had all week.

2 comments:

Pupyluvr916 said...

that is sooo cool! i feel so sorry for Dani! that is soo horrible! I can not believe Jeffery! he is a real jerk! i cant wait to hear the rest of the story!!!



keep up the good writing.

Anonymous said...

I feel kind of bad for Jeffrey but he deserved it! great story!